Odysseus 22 Revision

After reading aloud I changed a lot about my word choice in my monologue to help to make it seem more like something that Odysseus might actually say. After reading my monologue for the third time I started to develop an idea of how I would say my words in an expressive voice to get convey the point I am trying to get across. My partner also provided me with some great ideas on how to improve my essay which really helped guide me in my editing process.