Thursday, October 15, 2015
Revision
In the revision, I added epic smilies and epithet. In addition, I made my description more vivid to convey the message and portrait the characteristics of different characters. In the old version, some words and phrases is pretty confusing to readers, so in the revision, I deleted those sentences, and used direct and clear words and phrases.
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