During the revisions, I added a few more details and cleaned up some of the rough edges in my writing, such as catching any verb-tense mistakes. I made a few grammatical changes as well. I feel like my epic simile is prominent enough already, however I am considering possible changes to make it more precise. When I was reading my monologue aloud, I tried to add emphasis to certain words to
make the performance more interesting/captivating. It also helped me add or delete commas and words to help it flow better as a speech.
- Tally
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