During the revisions, I added a some details and made my writing clearer to read and understand, like using different words and fixing grammar mistakes. My epic simile was expansive enough since the beginning, and I think I may have even made it too expansive, and may shorten it later. While I was reading my monologue aloud, I tried to make the speech more interactive or entertaining. It also helped my talking to add or delete commas or periods to help it come out smoother.
-Courtney :)
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