Penelope Book 21

    I changed a lot of aspects of my monologue during the process of revision. My partner made helpful suggestions regarding verb tenses and adding more detail. Other changes I made in the content of my paper included making Penelope's point of view clearer during important events. While practicing my speech, I changed my tone and delivery after each time so that I was pausing and putting emphasis on important words or phrases. I also added words between sentences or events that would make the transitions smoother. I tried to focus on telling the story in a manner that represented Penelope's character traits.